The Fight
By Ella Age 7
“Boo!” I jumped out.
My dog got a startle with a woof and a yap. Max started to run and run. When he ran he was running like a tornado. Whizzed he bumped into a wall, crashed with a thump. I ran down the stairs and before I could say anything, my mum came in and said, “What is the racket?”
“Well,” I said, “that was what I was going to say, woof….” My dog scratched. We started to fight.
We did boxing. He kept on scratching. I ran but he chased me. I was frightened of a little dog, but he thought I was a dog too. I went outside but I was still getting chased. I ran back inside with a jump. I ran everywhere. Max stopped and skidded.
Mum came down, “What is the racket again?” I got a startle. I was shocked and Max talked in dog language.
Good work. I would like to hear more from Benjamin Rm11
Hi Ella I really loooooooooooooove your published story THE FIGHT about you and your dog Max
By Ella rose
That was a amazing piece of work. When I was reading it out I was amazed at how well you wrote your story.
JP Gerbes room 10
Cool story Ella. Emily Room11
Ella I think your story is cool – Madison Rm 10
What an awesome story Ella – it takes the reader on a wonderful adventure and captures our dog Max so well! Mum xx