Emily the German Shepherd was a very playful dog. She loved her owner. Her owner’s name was Rosie.
Emily jumps very high. Emily is not normal like any dog. She knows where there is a portal to go to Fiji.
They went through the portal and whizzed like a bumblebee on the way. Emily and Rose got to Fiji. They got there and played, then went back home.
The End. By Ella Rose.
Wow Ella, you are a real author! You wrote this at home all by yourself. Fantastic to see you are practicing your Narrative Writing like we are doing in class – I especially like the part where you used the simile “whizzed like a bumblebee’. I look forward to reading more of your stories that you write at home. Well done! From Miss Hurley.
Thanks Miss Hurley From Ella rose
Loved your one Ella Rose. It’s just amazing. That story is soooooooo my idol. Love it so badly tears came out of my eyes.
Harrison (Room 10)
thank you for commenting on my story like that
cool ella by toby 🙂